4:49 a.m. - silence, rest, breaths, dreams
4:50 a.m. - alarming, singing, snoozing, snoozing
5:20 a.m. - rise, stretch, shine, shower
6:40 a.m. - gather, pack, load, exit
7:52 a.m. - click, clack, stack, prep
7:53 a.m. - loudly, dramatically, energetically, playfully
8:00 a.m. - ponder, reflect, comprehend, share
11:23 a.m. - ravenously, thunderously, wildly, hungrily
2:16 p.m. - artsy, harmonious, skillful, creative
3:00 p.m. - bump, run, slam, dash
3:05 p.m. - click, clack, stack, prep
4:30 p.m. - gather, pack, load, exit
11:00 p.m. - silence, rest, breath, dreams
This is so clever! I could easily imagine the slices of your day with your words.
ReplyDeleteI love how your ending repeated the beginning. Yet, I read it and interpreted it differently. At the beginning, I read faster, feeling the rush to get out of bed, out the door, and on to all the busyness the day brings. At the end, I read it slower as the day comes to a close, we slow down and we rest. Neat post!
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